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Through the curtains of darkness he struggled
Forever it seemed he struggled…his breath rugged
And when he lost all hope…all will to exist
He saw the light…a thin ray cut through darkness
In disbelief he stared….yet with relief
Finally hope is here…be gone with grief
He reached out a trembling hand
The light spread… darkness bland
The light caught him …he embraced
Fused with his soul…he blazed
Tearing through shadows he went
Tearing… tearing…and down they went
Then he finally stopped…
Then he finally realized
It was her who were his guiding light
It was her whom he embraced
And for eternity was in debt
©2005-2009 ~TheSoleEmulator
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I found someone to bring me to life.....

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:iconocalikecoca:
Since am here thought to read them all. Well this one can perfectly go either after or before the "Face where the sun rise". Just the result would be different.

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Speranta imi oxigeneaza dorul
Ce-mi pasa de ce crede lumea?
Ma multumesc chiar cu putin
Chiar trebuie sa fim cu toti la fel?
:iconthesoleemulator:
Once again thanks!!!

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:heart: Rachel.
:iconsang-yu-nung:
This poem was intriguing, and I felt like I was speed reading through it to see what was going to happen, lol. The ending came out nicely; I thought the light was going to be Heaven from the other side, but I like your way better.

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~ sang_yu_nung ~
(Alison)

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"Time through the RaiN has set me f r e e ... "
- X Japan "Tears"
:icongornwen:
Its a happy poem! Which I must say is a nice bit of change. Very much has the correct texture and taste for the matters being dealt with, heavier in the beginning, lighter near the end.

Anyhoo, aye, lovely poem.

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>^. .^<
:iconthatguyisme:
that is a work of art man mabe because i can relate to every poem you wrote so far pacticly but man thsi is beautiful great job!

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<(^,^)>
:iconthatguyisme:
and newfavorite haha

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:iconwicked-stock:
I like it very much, well done :+fav:

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~stock-photographers
please visit my Art page: ~wicked-sparrow :gallery:
:earth: DIES DIEM DOCET.

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